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1. Prelude towards My Affection (unabridged) with Introduction

2. Analysis of Prelude & Personal Commentary

"..Well it started out rather simple, nothing ornate about it. To me, the simple language used best expressed the raw feelings of the speaker, whom may or may not be myself. I recall the original prelude was around less than forty lines with just the two stanzas- of course not of the current revision. I structured the poem in four different points of view if you have not caught on before. The first person, is the speaker, obviously a passionate individual. The second person, in the second refrain 'You and I ...' is the girl whom the speaker is addressing." 

3. Mystical Night Narration Disclosure

"Well I did not really see how such a thing is plausible since what everyone does is cradle each other back and forth. Maybe it's the mood which disillusions women or something. I was fairly regretful of the fact that I was not looking at her- instead, my eyes were wandering around searching for ... It was a impressive event to be exact. The lights exploded in unison along with the boisterous beats. The DJ's smoke created a Tyndall effect for the performers. You couldn't help but watch these youths have the time of their lives. As I listened, I could all but stop myself from writing in my head about this ... Funny how two bright individuals such as ourselves do not know how to resolve this. Thus, we dance to this endless refrain which is bound to swallow either of us sometime soon. Well I couldn't find her so that was the end of the final slow dance. The lights went on- people took pictures, all sorts of things. It wasn't that bad seeing as I did have fun and got to talk to her. And despite what Leon says, I don't think she'll forget me. I don't really have to make a move within the week- that is just unwarranted. Perhaps she'll see me as the considerate and gently individual who takes her interests above his own. Well you can figure it out. So there you go ... "

4. August Moon Festival - Narration & Thoughts

"It was tiring, it was fun. Still, there's wasn't an excuse for putting orange juice in the kitchen cabinet. A good writer's goal is to put across the idea using the least amount of words. Though for me, any event is worth more than five thousand words. Since this is a personal narration- brevity need not apply here. Also, personal narratives are non-fiction and a good writer has to be honest with his words. Thus, it will explain how I will put my actual thoughts and feelings into words- without ruining the writing by straining the truth to fit any shrouded needs ... Afterwards, I basically stood there until girls I knew such as Lisa came. I'm not sure what happened after that, but I think we started moving tables. I was glad I had something to do rather than just stand there feeling awkward. The tables were the perfect distraction for my anxieties ... May surprised me by remembering my name. That was good. I don't really know her that well- although, she appears to be the understanding type and really friendly. She doesn't overwork people and looks out for them. I guess I should have made more Asian friends at school since 'all i know are baquais and hwaiquais.' It's rather humorous how she knows about *ahem* ... "